January 2010
2 posts
Last Tunesday Tuesday
Its starts out like if it was from star wars like when the words are coming out and now its sounds like the sound when a movie comes out at first and now it just sounds like an organ or something or someone like dieing and being sent to the grave . Umm this sounds like the person is still alive and the heart beat came back and like the person was like banging on the coffin to come out of it that...
Quantity vs. Quality
That quality is always better then quantity what this quote or paragragh is trying to say. That the dead pile of clay was like all the stacks of paper with alot of words that could be meaningless because they are just writing alot because they have to not because like have to turn it in for like the quality of the work .
If you pay more attention to the words you use and like the structure of...
December 2009
6 posts
tunesday tunes day last one yay!
Its a calm but my head hurts right now so like i csant really imagine anything plus the people to the left of me are annoying like big time they dont shut up! Ok back to the song like the song is very calming like i dont know what to stay there is so much stuff going on in my life and in my head that i cant really concentrate in school and other types of things i space out and things of that...
an imporant person
It is not just one person that is very important in my life it is a pair. This pair or people are my parents . My mommy and daddy. These people are the best parents that like live on this planet because they have taguht me so many things about life and that been helpful in life. My mom teaches me about lots of different stuff . But my dad me and him have a connection that i could tell him...
tuesday tunes-day
It sounds scary at the begining lke if you were at a halloween party or like a freat fest. Then it gets kind of giggy. Then is starts geing some bass then some guitar . Its like some halloween juking music. Not. Well it sounds just plain wierd. It reminds me on like pop it. all random about it. It also sounds crazy like a bunch of random sounds put in a song with bass. It sounds like an outer...
I Smell...A Powerful Smell
The smell of an auto shop can be very diverse depending what part you are in. You can even feel the smell of the exhaust in the air of the cars being tested in the dyno the rubber being burnt up by some newbie at the shop. The Smell of the tires being taken on and off at the tire part of the shop. The smell the coolant and window washer. But the most unique smell is of the parts room
Action Packed Sentences
When I threw the __smooth__________________ stone, it ____________shot________ across the lake.
The ________delicate ____________ leaf ____sorrowed________________ in the wind.
The _________lively___________ flower ____glimmered________________ in the sun.
The _________died___________ grass ____was reborn________________ after the rain.
The ________petit ____________ pine cone _______tumbled...
November 2009
15 posts
My Turkey Day(s)
I had to much fun if u you know what i mean,at my thankgiving party or celebration. It Was alot of fun and alot of food and differnet types of drinks were served. hahah anyway my mom made honey smoke turkey. Also she made a sweet ham is was like aswome.
Tuesday tunesday Nueve(9)
It sounds like a a break up song like the rhythm of the song sounds like a break up or like saying good by forever. Never seeing the person ever again. It seems like it is going to happen today like i dont know it seems like this song is trying to tell me something that like something or someone is going to say good bye to me or that i am going to find out something bad
At the same time this song...
Showing vs Telling
Well i usually go eat with my family every weekend somewhere it doesnt matter where but we go somewhere. Well the most recent place i went with my family was New China buffet. It is an ok place to go to. Well you walk in the door and then you have to walk to the front desk and pay a one time fee per person and then go sit anywhere you want to go sit at. then you go put the reverved ticket on the...
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The story told about like showing instead of telling. Meaning that using more descripive and action words. It tells me or all the people that read this hopefully got out of it that it is about showing not telling. I also shared the reading so i kind of understood what my partner said so that is the same thing i got out of it.
Tuesday Tunesday Ocho
This song starts out really calm and soft i dont know what it reminds me of but i think it like i would think of it like in a special moment like something that will only happen once and that you want to caputre the moment. This song is slow all throughout the song and like its not my strong suit it is an ok song to go to sleep too or just relax or to read a book too. It is something that like i...
I will eat...
Im proably most likely going to go with a couple of friends from this class to Hooters. Well I think we picked this spot because we are guys and that should explain it. Well hopefully it will be fun and it will be my first time going there so im going to make it a blast. It better not be lame or im never going there ever again. Hopefully the people i go with are not lame and make the expericance...
The proudest moment of my life...
mmmm i really dont remember anything in paticular but i have a couple of this that im proud of that i did in my life or like things in that nature. First i helped out my church give out food for thanksgiving to the needy. Then I got my conformation freshman year. That was very speical to me because i was going to ccd since like i learned english so it was like seven to six years of going every...
Taboo 2 food
To eat this food you have to go to like an italian persons house. It like served all the time and there is many differnet types of it like spagetti or mastacholi or like stuff like that. I dont know much about this topic mexicans dont eat this really unless they go to like olive garden. It is good though. Like my mom makes it but like with a different twist to it so it is not athentic so thats is ...
Taboo 1
This character is in a Walt Disney movie. It is the main character in the movie. It is a little liar in this film. It is a little kid and it has a green grasshopper with him through the whole movie. Its dad is Gapedo. Its wish was to be a normal human being. It lets its dream go so its father could be a normal person again not a puppet.
A skittle
this tastes like a tingy flavor and it this flavor is down to earth it taste like a drink that i love to drink during the summer. It taste like a summery fun like it tastes like something i would but on my tacos hahah to give it a different flavor a more of a tangy flavor. It taste like someing that comes off a tree like i dont know how to decribe it.
It taste like a stingy like a slupry drink....
Tuesday Tunesday 7
It starts out really soft like then my clothes comes out of the dryer nice and warm hahah anyway its still is soft sounding and then it starts getting a beat and then it starts getting loud it makes me think about the movie Stomp the yard because like at the end of the movie the song seems something like this. But the movie is awsome but the song has a happy upbeat like a song you would think of...
The Meal From Hell
The meal in hell would be placed in a volanco and eating firey tacos! The People that would be with me would be the devil and my friends. I think this meal would be acool because i could talk to all the people that are like bad and like i can like have a food fight and like it would just be really cool in a voanco throwing stuff around and just having a good time in the meal from hell but at the...
The Greatest Meal Ever
The Greatest meal i have ever had was when my aunty invites us over to here house and she makes the best fajitas i have ever had. Like this is not like the normal stuff this food is like amazing. This best mexican food i have had ever! It has like beef, chicken, shrimp, red peppers, green peppers, onions and a bunch of other stuff that like she will not tell us because then we will never go to...
October 2009
12 posts
Grammar results
I was busy doing over stuff so by the time i finished doing the test like you had moved on so like i really never turned it in. Well i wish i had he results but it was just apre test so it doesnt really matter. Well it does matter but oooh well but if i had turned it in i think i would of done fine but i dont know what like verbs and adverbs and all the type of stuff is so thats the only part i...
Satire Onion articles
That in one article that a scientist at fermilab said that the earth might collide into something from other space soon but if that was true then the word would be in panic and all that type of stuff so it in real it is a bunch of bull.
The Next article i read was about crashes in like races like nascar or things in that nature.Well it said that the first crash was because all the cars were not...
DIRTY
well im going to write about how people think im dirty or how i got the nick name so you can know. Well freshman year is when i got it. The first time i went to go pick up my equippment for football Mikey T told me your playing football and im like ya fo show. So i took my equipment, met all the coahces and then left. During the season i played on B team it was fun for every drill we did it was...
Tuesday Tunesday 6 Film Scene
all the cars are lining up and all the racers are getting out of the cars greeting each other and addmiring the cars and the buety and time that was put into them. Poping the hoods, opening scissor doors, lowering cars shiny rims everything. An guys dream and then all the cars revening there engines for the first race to begin. as all the top racers going to the starting line reving there engines...
tuesday tunes day 5
this sounds like a passive song like if something or someone is going throught a slow but great death like if he or she had it had a good life and then it becomes more alive and then its like if the person revived and came back to life and haunting someone or just came back to life. Ithink this song was sad like i dont know how to explain it. It is just like something is about to die or it is on...
People driving way too slow
OMG! that pisses me off soooooooo bad. When im on prince crossing the speed limit is like 40 im going like kinda that and then the guy infront of me is going like 20 and i have to like slow the way down and i pisses me off when i have to brake! im speedy gonzalez and thats why im the one woth the speeding tickets lol. Omg now a days im speeding down everywhere but like i have to be careful now...
tuesday tunesday 4
this song makes me just think i guess or i dont know alot is going thru my life and i dont knopw if i am going to make the right desisions. It is just like a thinking song for me. It has a differnent meaning for everyone. Now it makes me think about life and how grteat it is to be alive nad thanks to my parents for making me the person that i am. This song just makes me think about how like now...
I Read...
HA! Is this a joke! i hate to read. But when i pick up a book that i am interested in i usaully finish it though. I only read when i have too. So the only real story i have ever read is like the on they give us in school and that is sometimes because sparknotes becomes your friend when you are lazy. Well lately i went into this class called critical reading and that opened up my eyes about books...
I've never been Sicker than...
Sophmore year during wrestling season i got an infection and i had the runs for like a month it sucked Well i had to drink alot of water for it go go away. I had to take like a mouthful of pills everyday. It was a pain in the butt. buti rather have that pain than the one i had at the moment. hahaha. But anyway it was bad i hated it and i had to go home like 10 times early because it got really...
ttd3
it makes me feel like something good is going to happen today that there is hope in the air like i dont know like a feeling that when you win or you are successfull at something you feel. I think this song is all about feeling and how it is saying how proud and happy it is ??? it is a song about happyness. It makes me feel like wow life is worth it and like how beauitful is and that hopefully...
September 2009
10 posts
Tuesday Tunes-Day 2
I makes me feel like there is hope in the air or like a song that would be playing in those comercails for 9/11 or the staving kids in africa. I makes me think of lots of things. It makes me feel in a way that us sort of happy and on my toes but serious enough. It sounds like a break up song or like a good bye song. This song is very calming and makes me think. Just think. Can’t tell you...
How to write a paper.
I really didnt get anything out of it i thought it was a very boring read and but there was alot of different literature. I think that this story can help me out by all the different type of liertuare and all the different types of writing styles because i need to expand my way of writing because i all write and expository paper i never write anything else. well sometimes i do but that is my...
A sensible Descion I made...
Thinking of this song makes me think about the choices i have made like smart and dumb. Like this past summer that the best speninding with my friends and family and doing stuff i shouldn’t be like racing and other dumb stuff. Love life i think i made the right choice because it is wierd to have someone cheat on you and stay with them so ya. But the best descion i did was taking this class...
Tuesday Tunesday
This piece makes me think about if someone has pass away and like that they are in the greifing process. it reminds me of being calm and chill and like thats the type of music that would be behind past memories. it seams like a song that would be played when its rainging and like sad like. Just listing to it makes me think of people that i miss nad people that i have with me right now and it also...
Can writing really Improve the quality of your...
Writng and reading can both impact your life because like you can read some pretty some scary stuff and like i mean when i read i have read some pretty nasty things that i might read in college. like discripitve books on the hollicost and other types of events that were really bad. they would explain what they would do and that type of thing can change the way you look and life and be greatful...
This Weekend I...
I went to the football and i was on the sideline since im out because I ripped the ligument in my thumb and im coming back today. I ripped it by hitting my partner right between the sholder pads and like the thumb got stuck and i like ripped it out and then it hurt and then i went numb. But whatever im exicted to play again because football is my life. Im going to miss it when it is gone. On...
My fixes in my paper
I fixed the errors that i saw like double spacing, spelling errors and a title. Well i dont know what to right about because that is all i fixed but i never got it back till like a couple of weeks ago and it took you forever to grade. Well i think it did well on the paper but ok well i fixed all the stuff i had to so ya.
This weekend!
So This weekend plus friday was awsome!!! Well on friday I played a football game and then on saturday slept over at my friends house and got crunk while playing madden ten on monster omg to much monster i didnt go to sleep till like 5! So then on sunday chilled and monday went fishing.
A Friday Night Football Game...
It is the most you can have while going to school,except going to partys but thats another story. The friday night experiance at west chicago high so cool because im not in the stands im actully playing in the game. Football is my life and it is very important to me and it means alot when i rock somebody on there but of i block for someone, it an easy way to get unstress and put the the built but...
August 2009
3 posts
This Morning
So, I woke up from my mom, hitting my room door, Edgar! wake up! And i was like whatever mom and i felt in for like 15 minutes more and then i woke up and i was like oh my god it is like 645 and i leave a 7 so i rushed in the shower, and that was the coldest and fastest shower i have taken in my life! Then, after that i put close on then went up stairs did my hair, and told my mom i had to go, if...
Writing Process
Im a senior at West Chicago Community High School andim using this program for educational propused in a class called writers workshop. In this class i have to do alot of writing and im not really that hot of a writer. im always getting verbs and nouns mixed up little things like that mess me up. I love this class and the people in it it is soooo muich fun i wish i didnt have to end. well im...
“We must play like champians, pracitce like champions, to be champions”
– Coach Rienke